Story Board Planning








 Scene 1

Box 1- Rachel at the check out counter with an Mis

Box 2- Asks cashier for price

Box 3- Cashier takes onion and checks price 

Box 4- Rachel says she can’t afford it

Box 5- Cashier doesn’t care, go to another place 

Box 6- Rachel gets frustrated and leaves

Scene 2

Box 1- Rachel goes home and puts stuff down on the counter

Box 2- Mom gets off the coach and walks towards her

Box 3- Mom ask Rachel where’s she has been showing concern

Box 4- Rachel Denys her mothers concerns, and begins to speak 

Box 5- Mom cuts Rachel off to ask about the onion

Box 6- Rachel says she didn’t get it and gives her mom a dollar

Scene 3

Box 1- The mom starts getting pissed off, gets verbally aggressive 

Box 2- Rachel starts to walk away

Box 3- Mom follows still yelling

Box 4- Rachel annoyed ended up yelling back at her mom

Box 5- They keep going back and forth until Rachel closes and locks the door

Box 6- She starts kicking and screaming in frustration, until she is finally calm

Scene 4

Box 1- Rachel gets up and calls her bf

Box 2- He answers asking what’s up

Box 3- Rachel just gives a brief explanation about her mother

Box 4- Rachel wants to hang out, so she ask if they can hang out

Box 5- The boyfriend agrees and brushes her off, eventually hanging up

Box 6- She finds it strange, so she calls her friend 

Scene 5 

Box 1- Rachel gives a brief explanation and Marley gives advice

Box 2- Rachel goes overboard with the venting and disrespects Marley

Box 3- Marley calls her out, then hangs up 

Box 4- Rachel confused asks herself what’s going on with everyone 

Box 5- Rachel puts her phone down and gets ready for bed

Box 6- She closes her door, turns off the light, and walks to the bathroom

Scene 6

Box 1- She is in the kitchen pouring cereal 

Box 2- Her mom asks why she is all dressed up

Box 3- she gets a phone call from her bf, while she tells her mom where she is going

Box 4 - Her mom starts to get loud, realizing she was on the phone

Box 5- She tells her boyfriend she is coming and hangs up

Box 6- She tells her mom buy and hangs up

Scene 7

Box 1- She runs out to her boyfriend and he kind of brushes her off

Box 2- She says hi and leans in for a kiss

Box 3- he leans away from the kiss, and tells her they need to talk, saying he wants to break up 

Box 4- Rachel starts grabbing him, hoping he is lying or joking

Box 5- He gets a phone call and starts to get into the car to leave, telling her they’d talk later

Box 6- She calls Marley telling her they need to talk and where to meet

Scene 8

Box 1- Rachel approaches Marley at a park crying

Box 2- Marley stands up and hugs Rachel, asking her what’s wrong

Box 3- Rachel starts to vent disrespecting Marley once again

Box 4- Fed up, Marley starts to go off and tells rachel about herself

Box 5- Rachel gets a phone finding out her mom died while Marley is yelling at her

Box 6- Marley noticed she isn’t listening, asking her if she was listening and Marley tells her that her mom died



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